Friday, September 09, 2005

poet in me

hi this is my clumsy attempt at poetry.hope u get bugged after going through this.

Shadows lengthen and fall
Time seems to come to a stall
Buildings rise by high and tall
Clouds move around and cover them like a shawl
In between all this I stand numb and small
Watching the raindrops fall on one and all
Deep down within I hear a call
N off I take cover in the nearest mall
I could hear a familiar voice hum Pink floyd's WALL
And then I see that face I longed for
Amidst all the confusion I could feel a premonition
"Was this an illusion?" I ask myself
In between all this I stand numb and small
Watching the raindrops fall on one and all
Deep down within I hear a call
I had attained Niravana
I was in love

Hats off 2 ashwin.byee.

6 comments:

Vijay said...

The Poet in you Blew-it-all...

Vijay

cartic said...

I still wonder this traditionally derived concept ..are all poets... lovers first ..or u bcam a poet after falling in love ... or is it that only lovers can bcom poets ...whatever..now its hight time u told who ur aallu is...?

cartic said...

I still wonder this traditionally derived concept ..are all poets... lovers first ..or u bcam a poet after falling in love ... or is it that only lovers can bcom poets ...whatever..now its high time u told who ur aallu is...?

cartic said...

I still wonder this traditionally derived concept ..are all poets... lovers first ..or u bcam a poet after falling in love ... or is it that only lovers can bcom poets ...whatever..now its high time u told who ur aallu is...?

Shashi Rajasekaran said...

good one dude :-)

Anonymous said...

whats wrong dude , two days constipation or something ???

NITYA .

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